vox nihili

What wonderfully articulated piece! I found only a couple of typos. red=spelling or change needs to be made blue=my comment Okay, so summer requirements for 11th grade Advanced Placement English ...

Ding Dong At this Russell rose back up and headed towards the door. Anyone who knew Russell knew that he did not give visitors a second chance to contact him ...

A/N: This is just a quick one shot I wrote for Avatar, with the prompt "Introduction." Please give concrits :) They are greatly appreciated. A Proper Introduction Zuko was in ...

As she took her child in her arms, she frowned at the girl, saying “You have been up here wasting time all morning. It isn’t raining very hard now—go tend ...

First off, let's get the nitpicks out of the way: The boy looked mildly disappointed, his ridiculously baggy cap sagging over one eye as he withdrew his head from the ...

Verdeyan, from Fleirzon When asked, I would open my wings just to show off, and then say, "Reading minds if you please, I already fly." What if your character awoke ...

[quote="stephaniez08"] Chapter 1 – The End to Summer, The Start to a New Friendship There was countless mud puddles scattered amongst the grassy terrain. There *were* his favourite chips were ...

... “I must speak to one of the healers! My mother is ill!” The boy looked mildly disappointed, his ridiculously baggy cap sagging over one eye as he withdrew his ...

Thanks for the edit. I must admit, speech tags are my bane. I'll have to go through and re-work the point-of-view thing, which as you pointed out is choppy. This ...

….. Footsteps echoed in the darkness. Verdeyan sat up, her head pounding with fear in her blood. The stiff pain of the lashes on her back ached. Someone was at ...

In that shining moment, I see from where I’ve come How far it has been, through pain and blood all that has been done. And looking back, the past in ...

Grace through Pain The burning sting, the aching throb, That defines the word, ‘pain’ The pain that we seek desperately to escape Shapes us, reveals what we truly are. Like ...

I officially feel silly now. Spelling and me, well, I need to be better friends with the spellcheck, you're absoiutely right. I"m not sure how precisely I managed to convince ...

9/10 Lol my grandpa had a habit of getting sleepy at the wheel.

I know the rhyme is heavily embeded in the poem, but I love the gentle rhyme when it goes ABCA.... it's so pretty.